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Ch 7, pg 1

April 15th, 2014, 8:30 pm

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Reply bananakin, April 15th, 2014, 8:23 pm

LET'S GET THIS PARTY STARTED I actually like that first panel. The rest, not so much. Lol

(When I get the hang of this new tablet I might go back to color, cause I really like seeing color pages better...)

((Since this isn't in color, you might not be able to tell, but those are oran berries))

(((And he's in a cave..)))

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User's Comments:

Reply Luigi_96, April 15th, 2014, 8:56 pm

Patch somehow looks older now.
I think it's the lines under his eyes.

And the fur on the sides of his face.

Reply Ziliath, April 15th, 2014, 8:57 pm

you seem to of changed his design a bit by adding those 'whiskers', makes him look a bit different.

Reply bananakin, April 15th, 2014, 9:01 pm

@Luigi_96: The lines are from exhaustion. I didn't realize I didn't do the fur thing before. lol It's been too long!!

@Ziliath: It does, I didn't realize and now I'm not sure I like it. I did that on Ch 7's cover, but it didn't look so out of place there. Maybe cause he was in color?

Reply Ziliath, April 15th, 2014, 9:08 pm

there is always the option of changing it being all digital and all. it looks weird cause his lower jaw merges into his tuffs of fur like they were horns :P perhaps a little more shading would do the trick to make them look more bent, or just have him smooth them over in the next page. that works :)

Reply bananakin, April 15th, 2014, 9:14 pm

@Ziliath: That's a good idea xD I'll have him smooth them out like they're bed head. ahahah

What do you mean by changing it being all digital?

Reply Ziliath, April 15th, 2014, 9:21 pm

cant you go back into your image and change it the same way you made it and replace the image? but thats only if you wanna remove all traces of the design change. 1 other thing, greyscale looks great, i think 3 shades of grey give it more depth and its just as simple.

Reply Shax, April 15th, 2014, 9:23 pm

so how many pages you planning on posting today? :3

Reply bananakin, April 15th, 2014, 9:43 pm

@Ziliath: Ohhh I see what you mean now. Lol I feel silly that that just didn't make sense in my mind. I might go back and alter it a bit, if any part, that last panel. It really sticks out to me as weird.

@Shax: This is it for today xD Wish I could do more, but I'm tired lol

Reply Maera Fey, April 16th, 2014, 3:15 am

Wow! A new page? So soon?! *dies out of excitement*

Reply andreya225, April 16th, 2014, 9:08 am

lol glad the move went well and i hope you get use to drawing soon ^u^

Reply Pokemanchaz, April 16th, 2014, 3:45 pm

Hope you enjoyed your 10-month break, I can't wait to see your drawings again! And don't feel bad about not updating, it's perfectly fine for loss of motivation to happen after something like that. Also, cheers to 700 fans!!!

Reply bananakin, April 19th, 2014, 4:36 pm

@Maera Fey: If it hadn't been so late I probably would have started another. xD

@andreya225: Hehe Yeah, still here. It's weird drawing after such a long break!

@Pokemanchaz: It's been a weird ten months. lol 700 fans is crazy!! :O

Reply andreya225, April 20th, 2014, 5:06 pm

@bananakin: i get it, i don't get to draw as much as i would like to either .u. life and stuff

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